Freewrite #4
Source #1
A. Paul L. Knox is the author. He is distinguished professor at Virginia Tech and has served as the dean of the College of Architecture and Urban Studies. He teaches classes on urban and regional development. I feel he has a slight bias because he lives close to Washington, D.C. This article was published in a Geographers journal.
B. The intended audience is public planners and architects designing in and around the Washington, D.C. area. I know this is aimed at this audience because it is analyzing what is already there not describing where the city is going.
C. The purpose is academic because it has formally been published in a National Journal.
D. I feel that most/all of Paul Krux’s writtings are very reliable and credible. It seems to be very valid and relevant to what I am looking at researching.
Source #2
A. This book is written by Nathan Glazer and Cynthia Field. Cynthia Field has written other publications about the National Mall and design. She seems to have a very extensive background about design and knows what she is talking about.
B. The intended audience are architects looking at Washington, D.C. People in the field who are looking to learn from D.C. or even build there.
C. The purpose is educational because it is informing the public of Washington, D.C.’s past and how they got here today.
D. I feel that this book is credible because the author has written multiple different documents about this topic. I feel this information to be current because it was written realatively recently. I sense a slight bias in the writing but nothing extreme because she is more enlightening us rather than just analyzing.
Washington, D.C. is a city that can bring a different thought to mind for different people. However, everyone seems to have a thought about it in some way. Most citizens would also not jump to the thought of ‘How was the city designed?’ This is one of the feats that make Washington, D.C. what it is today. The National Mall was an idea with roots dating back multiple centuries. In Nathan Glazer and Cylthia Field’s book, The National Mall, they say, “It has its origins in Thomas Jefferson’s own clever sketch plan for the city, which he made the last week of March 1791, at the very moment L’Enfant was beginning his preliminary survey of the city’s site” (13). This careful planning has made the National Mall an international icon and a staple of this nations capital. It is a place where people can come together and feel support for something that they believe in. In Paul Knox’s “The Restless Urban Landscape: Economic and Sociocultural Change and the Transformation of Metropolitan Washington, DC,” he begins to establish what the National Mall has been used for. “The central premise is that the built environment is both the product of, and the mediator between, social relations” (182). To different people the National Mall means something different, however, to most people it is the connector between government and its people. This small piece of open land in the nations capital shapes the behavior of an entire culture. Without the mall such tremendous events would not have had the impact that they still posses today.
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Hi Marc. This paragraph sounds like an opening to an essay in that it draws your attention in right away. Here are some suggestions to think about in future writing:
1.) Think about how you establish credibilty of your sources in the signal tags in which you give their name and title of text. Establishing their credible ethos will only boost yours.
2.) Think about taking time to develop your ideas before moving on. One thing we can do in terms of working with sources is to extend their work. So, for instance, you use quote from Glazer and Field to introduce careful design, but don’t discuss the design planning at all before in next sentence you say “this careful planning.” You use Glazer and Field to broach topic of careful planning, then develop just how careful it was before moving on so quickly to next point.
3. How can you create a smoother transition to next source. You say that mall is place where people can come together and support something they believe in and then move into next quote a bit roughly. Think about how you can use your own ideas to link the two sources and make them interact somehow…
Hope these suggestions are useful…